Juno 1, 1924 
13 3rovn Street, 
Providence, 
Pear Parnald;- 
I 'nave jour letter dated Pay 29 with enclosed copy of the 
article for the Geographical Review. 
I ara surprised tc find my name in the prominent place you have given it, 
I aid not oapeot it ana aca rath or dubious as to its appropriateness. if 
on sober second thought you still fell inclined tc keep it there I shall of 
course regard it as a distinct compliment although inappropriate. 
So far us the text is concerned I think it is to the point and not over¬ 
done. There are only a few points where I would suggest making any change. 
On pcige 5 1 have suggested changing the points of the compass from west 
to Northwest [ere] in two places. 
On page b 1 have indioatod an insert bv way of emphasizing the charaeer- 
istis top of t't. Logan. Perhaps you will prefer to change the wording however, 
i’&rther down to the sano rage I have shortened your quotation as the part I 
have cut out does net appear in the translation of Logan’s report that Lodge 
sent me. .Perhaps there j.s a slip in this and yours is entirely correct. 
1 have also changed "s summit" to '’another" to conform to Lodge’s translation, 
similarly I have inserted "[the Saddle]" as this appears on the map. 
On page 6 I have indicated, a footnote that seems to me might be well to 
incorporate either at this or at some other appropriate place in the ms. 
Thank you for the information regarding possible assistants on the 
Chestnut scouting work. As yet I have heard nothing further from vVashington 
regarding- the matter. 
1 am planning to get up to the next Club meeting and will hope to see 
you then. If nob 1 want to take this opportunity to wish you all good luck 
ci- the prospective Newfoundland trip. I only wish 1 could go along too. 
I am inclosing the ms. 1 preusaae you will order some separates and 
hope you will include in your order 50 or 75 for me. I will settle with 
you later for tie same.when l know the amount. 
Sincerely 
