23 Brown Street, 
Providence, 2.1. 
June 1, 1924 
Pear Fernald:- 
I have your letter dated May 29 with enclosed copy of the 
article for the Geographical Review. 
1 am surprised to find ray name in the prominent place you have given it. 
1 did not expect it and am rather dubious as to its appropriateness. If 
on sober second thought you still fe*l inclined to ltepp it there 1 shall of 
course regard it as a distinct compliment although inappropriate. 
So far as the text is concerned I think it is to the point and not over¬ 
done. There are only a few points where I would suggest making any change. 
On page 5 1 have suggested changing the points of the compass from west 
to Northwest [ern] in two places. 
On page 6 I have indicated an insert by way of emphasising the characer- 
istic top of Mt. Logan. Perhaps you will prefer to change the wording however. 
Farther down on the same page 1 have shortened your quotation as the part I 
have cut out does not appear in the translation of Logan's report that Dodge 
sent me. Perhaps there is a slip in this and yours is entirely correct. 
I have also changed "a summit" to "another” to conform to Dodge's translation. 
Similarly I have inserted "[the Saddle]" as this appears on the map. 
On page 8 I have indicated a footnote that seems to me might be well to 
incorporate either at this or at some other appropriate place in the ms. 
Thank you for the information regarding possible assistants on the 
Chestnut scouting work. As yet I have heard nothing further from Washington 
regarding the matter. 
I am planning to get up to the next Club meeting and will hope to see 
you then. If not I want to take this opportunity to wish you all good luck 
on the prospective Newfoundland trip. I only wish I could go along too. 
1 am inclosing the ms. I pre^rae you will order some separates and 
hope you will include in your order" 50 or 75 for me. 1 will settle with 
you later for the same.when I know the amount. 
Sincerely 
